Monday, September 27, 2010

Do we like this?

UPDATE: added an image with some suggested tips.    

Line art by Fooray

I can't figure out if i like the background of text i put. It's the first couple of sentences of the first chapter of Peter Pan. I also took out the hook.
any comments? I need help. Doesn't feel done and i'm not happy with it. posting for help!!! :D

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