Do we like this?

UPDATE: added an image with some suggested tips.    

Line art by Fooray

I can't figure out if i like the background of text i put. It's the first couple of sentences of the first chapter of Peter Pan. I also took out the hook.

any comments? I need help. Doesn't feel done and i'm not happy with it. posting for help!!! :D

Huh?!?!

       

    Yea, i don't know either...

Photography

Hey ya! Not sure if any of my watchers on this blog know that I've recently got into photography!
Bought myself a Canon 7D with a couple of lens.
I've been really having a lot of fun with it. And I'm hoping to make it some sort of side job! I mostly do it cause I freaking love taking pictures. Anyway here's my website, let me know what you think!

CassieFuertez.com